On the beach of the open sea,
A scene that was always a peaceful thing,
Is covered in storm clouds and raging waves,
Like my heart that aches for you today.
I listen to the roar of the thunder and ocean
Collide like two lions fighting.
I wonder what it'd be like to lose myself in it,
To lose any thoughts of you I have left,
Because they are tearing me apart.
I stand up all to quickly,
Stumble more towards the sea,
And before I can run,
I get tangled in the fingers of the icy water,
That want me to live at peace with them.
I try to run,
But slip and fall,
And scream your name,
As I go with the waters,
That have claimed me their own,
To live on forever,
Never changing,
Never growning,
Never to see the light again...
But the darkness that has stolen my breath away.
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This isn't romantic at all! x_X
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Well done.
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You made the death at sea sound romantic and the sea sounds hungry - I loved the way you portrayed it - really inspiring.
Maybe in To lose any thoughts of you I have left,
Because they are tearing me apart you should rather say To lose any thoughts of you I have left,
... they are tearing me apart
Hmmm ... I don't know, I guess it doesn't sound as mysterious as I thought it would if you used the "..."
Ah well, just a thought...
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I'd say he's about one Fruit Loop shy of a full box!
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